我唱的《apologize》女生版，第一次自己发歌，大家多多指教

I'm holding on your rope,
紧握住你的绳索
Got me ten feet off the ground
我已经悬在十英尺的空中
I'm hearin what you say but I just can't make a sound
我可以听到你说的所有，却只能绝望沉默
You tell me that you need me
你说你需要我
Then you go and cut me down, but wait
然后你转身离去 切断绳索 让我坠落，可等等
You tell me that you're sorry
你告诉我你很抱歉
Didn't think I'd turn around, and say...
却没想到我会转身说...

It's too late to apologize, it's too late
现在说抱歉已经太迟，真的太迟
I said it's too late to apologize, it's too late
我说 一声对不起来得太晚 ，真的太晚

I'd take another chance, take a fall
我想我还会努力，宁愿再次被你伤害
Take a shot for you
也再给你一次让我接受你的机会
And I need you like a heart needs a beat
我需要你 就像心脏需要跳动
But it's nothin new
但是一切都已成过往
I loved you with a fire red-
我曾用来爱你的热火
Now it's turning blue, and you say...
已经变得苍白，你却说
"Sorry" like the angel heaven let me think was you
“对不起” 你的道歉对我来说就如天堂
But I'm afraid...
但是这一次我恐怕

It's too late to apologize, it's too late
现在说抱歉已经太迟，真的太迟
I said it's too late to apologize, it's too late
我说 一声对不起来得太晚，真的太晚了


It's too late to apologize, it's too late
现在说抱歉已经太迟，真的太迟
I said it's too late to apologize, it's too late
我说 一声对不起来得太晚，真的太晚了
It's too late to apologize, it's too late
现在说抱歉已经太迟，真的太迟
I said it's too late to apologize, it's too late
我说 一声对不起来得太晚，真的太晚了
I'm holdin on your rope, got me ten feet off the ground...
我紧握住你的绳索 却使自己身悬半空

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[ 本帖最后由 静影沉壁 于 2008-6-21 16:59 编辑 ]

chaochao977

大爱这首…单曲循环 无限听啊…

jiuzheyici

主要是男女生的key差太多了。。

音音

唱得挺不错的,LZ不能弄个直接播放吗？

liyiqin0715

我觉得LZ唱的还不错。
声音很好听，有些地方不够细腻。有些词的发音有点奇怪。
嘛、毕竟不是欧美的人嘛~

woshilusso

这首歌 挺有名的呀~~不错

NoooooobY

mm 开头和副歌部分  完全 感觉是 - -！.....
两种风格！

后期效果....没听出来.......


继续加油！

charlottezj

“ground ”舌位太过前了
“ten”没有卷舌，却发了卷舌
anyway
谢你的评论

K.R.Y

嗯 模仿痕迹很严重
加油加油哇

laoqinye

感觉还没唱开，不过音很准，不错不错