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作者: safelos222 时间: 2009-1-30 14:13:59 标题: ★新人报道★Flipsyde feat Tatu--happybirthday

本帖最后由 safelos222 于 2009-1-31 04:05 编辑

LYC:
Please accept my apologies, wonder what would have been
Would you've been a little angel or an angel of sin?
Tom-boy running around, hanging with all the guys.
Or a little tough boy with beautiful brown eyes?
I payed for the murder before they determined the sex
Choosing our life over your life meant your death
And you never got'a chance to even open your eyes
Sometimes I wonder as a fetus if you faught for your life?
Would you have been a little genius in love with math?
Would you have played in your school clothes and made me mad?
Would you have been a little rapper like your papa da Piper?
Would you have made me quit smokin' by finding one of my lighters?
I wonder about your skintone and shape of your nose?
And the way you would have laughed and talked fast or slow?
Think about it every year, so I picked up a pen
Happy birthday, love you whoever you woulda been
Happy birthday.

Chorus:
what I thought was a dream (make a wish)
Was as real as it seemed (happy birthday)
What I thought was a dream (make a wish)
Was as real as it seemed

I made a mistake!

Verse 2:
I've got a millon excuses to why you died
Bet the people got their own reasons for homicide
Who's to say it woulda worked, and who's to say it wouldn't have?
I was young and strugglin' but old enough to be your dad
The fear of being my father has never disappeared
Pondering frequently while I'm sippin' on my beer
My vision of a family was artificial and fake
So when it came time to create I made a mistake
Now you've got a little brother maybe he's really you?
Maybe you really forgave us knowin' we was confused?
Maybe everytime that he smiles it's you proudly knowin' that your father's doin' the right thing now?
I never tell a woman what to do with her body
But if she don't love children then we can't party
Think about it every year, so I picked up a pen
Happy birthday, love you whoever you woulda been
Happy birthday.

Chorus:
What I thought was a dream (make a wish)
Was as real as it seemed (happy birthday)
What I thought was a dream (yeah, make a wish)
Was as real as it seemed

I made a mistake!

And from the heavens to the womb to the heavens again
From the endin' to the endin', never got to begin
Maybe one day we could meet face to face?
In a place without time and space
Happy birthday.

From the heavens to the womb to the heavens again
From the endin' to the endin', never got to begin
Maybe one day we could meet face to face?
In a place without time and space

Happy birthday.

Chorus:
What I thought was a dream (make a wish)
Was as real as it seemed (happy birthday)
What I thought was a dream (make a wish)
Was as real as it seemed

I made a mistake.!

PS:本来想把和声的地方也就是Tatu的部分..一起混在伴奏里..但是听下来发觉效果不一样听起来很怪...没办法..Tatu的部分就只能自己录了....由于男生唱女生的KEY实在太高..我已经尽力做到最好了...这个部分我起码录了50+遍...但是第3句用真声顶上去很勉强...所以只能用了假声...so 原谅我吧....anyway...

第一次录这种类型的歌...发音还不是很好....希望各位高手们能多给小弟一点建议

作者: safelos222 时间: 2009-1-30 14:18:00

还有哦..VERSE2的歌词..有几个地方我稍微做了一点改动.....

作者: safelos222 时间: 2009-1-30 21:07:24

自己帮自己顶一下

作者: melodia 时间: 2009-1-30 21:53:22

本帖最后由 melodia 于 2009-1-30 21:55 编辑

这个俺喜欢！新人很厉害！怎么没人顶|||
我来顶一击吧。。。
好奇这歌为什么只有人发歌没有人发过伴奏呢...

作者: safelos222 时间: 2009-1-31 04:00:47

这个俺喜欢！新人很厉害！怎么没人顶|||
我来顶一击吧。。。
好奇这歌为什么只有人发歌没有人发过伴奏呢...
melodia 发表于 2009-1-30 21:53

这个伴奏是我朋友帮我从外国的网站上扒下来的......

作者: safelos222 时间: 2009-2-2 12:18:16

为什么没有人哟...奇怪了..

作者: smallpotato 时间: 2009-2-2 21:03:12

唱得很不错的啊。女声部分有很有感觉。
就是局部节奏与气息可以控制地更好点。
支持LZ

作者: safelos222 时间: 2009-2-3 16:14:55

唱得很不错的啊。女声部分有很有感觉。
就是局部节奏与气息可以控制地更好点。
支持LZ
smallpotato 发表于 2009-2-2 21:03

奔泪啊...终于有人来听了....
谢谢LS的哦..
你说的很对....

作者: 俏俏 时间: 2009-2-3 16:19:14

念的非常好男生唱得很空灵有one republic的感觉哈哈~~
有些地方节奏有点乱

作者: 俏俏 时间: 2009-2-3 16:20:39

还有口水声哈哈哈

作者: safelos222 时间: 2009-2-3 18:04:05

还有口水声哈哈哈
俏俏发表于 2009-2-3 16:20

哈哈..有强人来听就是不一样.一针见血哈.....

作者: azurelucid 时间: 2009-3-15 23:24:04

Wow~~~lz终于又发歌了，之前听过一首印象很深刻呢～～
非常非常喜欢你的声音，很sexy，发音很不错的，lz实在是太谦虚了～～
还有，那个口水声，呵呵，super cute! ：）

作者: safelos222 时间: 2009-6-2 22:20:41

- -!!!口水这个问题到现在也困饶着我

作者: wooohu 时间: 2009-6-2 22:30:23

哎呀！！真好听啊！！！！之前听过但忘留言支持了！！！！念的好唱的也好啊！！！

作者: 四喜 时间: 2009-8-6 16:57:49

喜欢这首。。。
顶上去了
LZ的说唱有自己的味道。

作者: cheerpunkid 时间: 2009-8-6 19:34:59

本帖最后由 cheerpunkid 于 2009-8-6 19:36 编辑

哈哈,我也听到了口水声音.
lz声音很不错哦.唱的部分也很好,假音和RAP都很流畅啊.
我一直觉得能说唱的人很厉害,因为自己是个连说话都会舌头打结的人.....
BTW,口水声so cute.哈哈

作者: 小啊同学 时间: 2009-8-8 21:15:33

楼主你声音很安逸啊！！！

口水声。。。是啥子？换气的时候的那个。。。？

楼主唱得好帅啊~~我开始以为那个HAPPY BIRTHDAY是别个伴奏自带的，楼主你声音好帅啊~~~

作者: safelos222 时间: 2009-8-12 15:00:48

看了大家的评价我有继续录下一首的勇气了...哈哈（臭不要脸O_O)

作者: Eggdanny 时间: 2009-8-14 02:46:23

lz可以的~~不过还可以更熟练~~哈~

作者: joyce_bei 时间: 2010-3-21 23:31:28

很棒,怎么可以沉下去呢.顶
呵呵

作者: bongjigiu 时间: 2010-6-6 21:29:27

用啥处理人声的我小白

作者: cxh257 时间: 2010-6-6 21:37:43

这个我也录了。。

你的说唱是那种很受的啊。。

气很虚~~

不过还是很棒呀~

唱的话气息也是不足哦。。

作者: safelos222 时间: 2010-6-12 19:44:48

回复 22# cxh257

你的能发给我听听看吗？？

作者: fighter456 时间: 2010-6-13 00:15:22

顶
就喜欢这么自然的版。。。。

作者: safelos222 时间: 2010-8-4 13:33:56

顶
就喜欢这么自然的版。。。。
fighter456 发表于 2010-6-13 00:15

谢谢这位朋友的夸奖~~

作者: MesC 时间: 2010-8-4 21:24:44

挖!! 原来happy birthday有人翻过!!>///////<
up上去up上去. 超爱的一首rap.<3

挺不错的. lz多点出rap呀=w=
哪怕是tatu唱的部分也挺好的. 假音也准.
从这几句貌似听出lz唱比rap佳也说不定//v//

作者: safelos222 时间: 2010-8-26 22:23:36

回复 26# MesC

呵呵。谢谢你哦。。你的作品我也听了，很不错的，希望能有合作~~

作者: 魔声涡轮 时间: 2010-11-12 17:18:25

比较喜欢这首翻唱，给顶个，说唱有自己的特点出来

作者: vickychenzq 时间: 2011-6-30 00:13:02

英文好棒！！！！！！！！！！崇拜！！！！！！！

作者: pcvitc 时间: 2011-6-30 09:40:43

发音挺正的但是rap的部分稍显单薄

作者: m920374605 时间: 2012-9-19 14:10:30

啊哈~~我也在学~说唱是女生的弱项啊，不知道女生唱起来感觉怎么样~

作者: 。音若幽兰 时间: 2012-9-20 20:39:21

咬字很不错呢这歌我也很喜欢 tatu的居然还能改成这种方式哦 LZ不错哦只是前面rap补发有些地方可能节奏问题有点赶了

作者: pcvitc 时间: 2012-10-17 17:01:39

太强了这么多音轨很费时的 rap部分很有感觉哦~

作者: shen999xiang 时间: 2013-7-29 22:55:50

楼主你的伴奏哪里弄得啊，能否给我一份。。我找不到和声的

作者: zorro66 时间: 2013-7-29 23:25:52

rap 说的好溜啊佩服佩服。。厉害~

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