新手发首歌~《part of me》~

凡圞~Perfeen

我的英文发音一直有点问题，听起来很不正宗，朋友说像跳大神……

管他的……

Days like this I want to drive away
Pack my bags and watch your shadow fade
'Cause you chewed me up and spit me out
Like I was poison in your mouth
You took my light, you drained me down
That was then and this is now
Now look at me

This is the part of me that you're never gonna ever take away from me, no
This is the part of me that you're never gonna ever take away from me, no
Throw your sticks and stones
Throw your bombs and your blows
But you're not gonna break my soul
This is the part of me that you're never gonna ever take away from me, no

I just wanna throw my phone away
Find out who is really there for me
'Cause you ripped me off, your love was cheap
Was always tearing at the seams
I fell deep and you let me drown
But that was then and this is now
Now look at me

This is the part of me that you're never gonna ever take away from me, no
This is the part of me that you're never gonna ever take away from me, no
Throw your sticks and stones

Throw your bombs and your blows
But you're not gonna break my soul
This is the part of me that you're never gonna ever take away from me, no

Now look at me, I'm sparkling
A firework, a dancing flame
You won't ever put me out again
I'm glowing, oh woah oh
So you can keep the diamond ring
I never liked it anyway
In fact you can keep everything
Yeah, yeah
Except for me

This is the part of me that you're never gonna ever take away from me, no
This is the part of me that you're never gonna ever take away from me, no
Throw your sticks and stones
Throw your bombs and your blows
But you're not gonna break my soul
This is the part of me that you're never gonna ever take away from me, no

This is the part of me that you're never gonna ever take away from me, no
This is the part of me that you're never gonna ever take away from me, no
Throw your sticks and stones
Throw your bombs and your blows
But you're not gonna break my soul
This is the part of me that you're never gonna ever take away from me, no

ohgod

感觉介个伴奏有点怪怪的，支持一下楼主。

danick2008

不错，楼主继续加油~

rapMY

唱得不错！！声音很好听！！楼主继续加油

lacunae、

发音还好啊、
有个小小的坏习惯，到尾的时候有点、、、、形容不出来。。腔音、？ 在你的胸腔上部。。。

zhuanghuiyuan

可能是你的尾音和吞音有点点太重...所以有点不自然  听多点就找到窍门了  不错啊 加油~~!!

cater2u

哈哈，可能标题太短了，没人发现。。觉得不错啊

凡圞~Perfeen

没有人理我么……